THE LION´S HAIR
Obviously, it is certain that each person is different, even the people of the same sex. From my point or view, generally speaking, women love more strongly than men, not only because they express their feelings out, men do it too. There are differences between both sexes, not only the physical appearance, but their brain, thoughts, necessities are different too.
The case of the Ethiopian couple in the story is frequent in our society. Did you hear the TV and Radio news along this year? How many situations of familiar violence or battering were committed? Most of those abuses have their origin in situations which are similar to the Ethiopian couple.To be married is to have a contract based on love, like a contract job is based on money for service. Why married people break their marriage if they love each other? Thinking about the story, are there men like a fierce animal and women have to take care and approach them step by step? Sorry, but I do not agree.Nowadays to have a good relationship, “respect”, is the key. You do not have to do bad things or have bad behaviour to other person, if you do not want they do the same bad things on you. So try to do with others what you would like that they did with you.
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